Project 3 Rework
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This project, which had a couple of parts to it, was a personal favorite of mine from last semester. I felt that although the original version was okay, I felt like I could do a bit more to give an ominous feeling to the silhouette by adding a more prominent glow to the eyes and a drop shadow around the figure.
Moving the text on the left down was a good idea. I'm not convinced you needed to add that drop shadow at all. You have created a readability issue with the lower right text and simply darkened the background - making it a bit fuzzy. Not necessary! I'm curious why you felt you needed to do that?
ReplyDeleteI really like your design! I like where you placed your text since it balances the design. I love the fonts you chose and the colors! I also agree that the drop shadow is not needed since it looks better without it.
ReplyDeleteI love this Sammie! Great chose of colors and fonts, good contrast between darkness and lightness.That blurry red shadow around the eyes and bottom paragraph is fantastic.
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