Project 2- Rework (Update)
I have made suggested edits to cover, contents, and spread.
cover- reduced size and placement of brush shape on bottom as well as the copy within.
contents- adjusted the leading of the body copy.
spread- eliminated excess negative space below article.
cover- reduced size and placement of brush shape on bottom as well as the copy within.
contents- adjusted the leading of the body copy.
spread- eliminated excess negative space below article.
This looks great! I quite like the page with the text more now that I realize just how much space there was before. Eliminating that white space makes it more appealing to the eye I think. It did look very good before, but it just keeps getting better. It's awesome. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI love the progress you have made on this project. Each page is very different, yet they still all tie together really nicely and still have a common theme. I also really like the use of negative space in this project. Everything seems centered and very professional.
ReplyDeleteLast little detail would be to make sure the #s in the Table of Contents sit correctly over each other. Think of a column of numbers, they sit FR - and here they are sitting FL alignment. Working with tabs can help this happen.
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