Menu possible final draft?
I have incorporated the suggestions from the last post of these menus. I have changed the typeface for the title and headings to all caps for better legibility. I have used one hue of blue throughout and have decided to desaturate the inside of the dessert menu, as well, to increase the unity throughout even more. Feedback appreciated!
Dinner Menu Cover
Dinner Menu Inside
Dinner Menu Back Cover
Dinner Menu Inside
Dinner Menu Back Cover
Dessert Menu Cover
Dessert Menu Inside
Dessert Menu Back Cover
You did it - the colors have come together really well. I notice a few details: Inside the menu please notice the stroke on the text frame that holds "Drinks"; Talkin Tina's blurb would fit better in a slightly wider 4-line text block within that speech bubble; there are a few places that appear to be dark type on dark value color creating a readability issue - please scan for those instances (including the back cover contact info area... very hard to read). Maybe the phone could be gray (not blue) and much lighter?
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