Rework- Safe Run







I made changes to my previous posted design such as adding an outer glow to the headline and also adding drop shadows to Safe Run and my added " the future of running is finally here." I changed the effect of the background so that you could better see the protective light around the figure. I think there is a better use of space and more contrast between the typography and graphic elements.

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  1. NikkiMarch 24, 2020 at 6:03 PM

    I really like this design! I like how the protective light is around the guy. It makes him stand out. Your design is definitely balanced and unified. I like where you placed the text too and the color orange you chose for the background and over the guy.

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    1. NikkiMarch 24, 2020 at 6:08 PM

      I also like how you have more contrast for this second rework design than the other rework design posted earlier.

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  2. Coni PorterMarch 26, 2020 at 6:52 AM

    The composite image is so sophisticated - and the typography is getting better. I would suggest that you find a taller condensed font to help fill all that space at the top of your design (or distort this one and see if it can handle the distortion ok). Making the heading larger makes all kinds of sense to me, since your logo is so large (maybe too large?) and so bold... strengthening the heading would simply allow it to take its place as a "heading" in the design (remember visual hierarchy?). Should the website be just a bit larger? How important is that... pretty important, since you aren't giving any details information about the product in this ad.

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