Surreal Landscape Photoshop 2/28 update
I have rearranged the poem around the frame in such a way that it is in the sequence that the poem was written. The poem itself is quite long, and very surreal, so I have only chosen the lines that have the most visual imagery associated with them. My thought in leaving the lines written in the stars more obscured is to bring the feeling of the night/death closing in on the poet. Let me know what you think.
Changes to the type color make it readable… yeah! So… I understand the need to keep the type in the sky a dark value, but know that the reader might never actually read it. Please print this in color, and let’s take a look at it next class…maybe I’m wrong!
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