PSA Domestic Violence/Pets
I have increased the saturation on the purple ribbon and have fit the text more comfortably within the space inside of the ribbon area, making it easier to read. I have also increased font size of the tagline "Shelter Together", as it is the main message of the PSA.
The changes all improved this. I see that the by-line could sit to the right, on the last line of the quote. Consider that, so it isn’t the only text line centered under a FL text block. Adding line spacing to the fact between the legs of the ribbon would also make it a bit more readable. Notice that the quote is a good example of line spacing that improves readability for that font.
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