Project 2--Updated



This is my Anxiety PSA. I expanded the sky upward to give more space for the type and enlarged it. I also put the link below it instead of at the bottom. I also fixed the lighting and gradients on the sky a bit to not make it quite as dark at the top. Please let me know if there's any more I can do to make it better. Thanks!

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  1. NikkiFebruary 28, 2020 at 5:30 AM

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    1. NikkiFebruary 28, 2020 at 5:37 AM

      The design of your Anxiety PSA is amazing. Your design has strong balance and unity. Maybe change the font for the text at the bottom to look like water or make the text on the bottom look like water. Overall, This is a very strong composition.

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  2. Coni PorterFebruary 29, 2020 at 10:42 AM

    The top typography is more readable, and sits more prominently! That’s good. Do you see a balance issue here? I’m glad the heading is FL, rather than centered (an overly easy solution). But of course, it means you many need to add some elements in the lower right 1/2 of the composition to rebalance the design. Would it be ridiculous to add a fish… reading the words on her shirt? Not humorous or light-hearted in any way… just a realistic fish. If that seems crazy (and it might)… then what element can you add in that area to achieve compositional balance?

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