Project 1: Revision --Chelsea

Hey guys! To explain a bit about this project: This was my PSA when I took Design Theory 2 1/2 years ago (left.) It was the first thing I ever made, so it needed a complete overhaul. I saw potential in it and really wanted to improve it (which meant completely remaking it.) When I first created the old one, I didn't even know Illustrator, just photoshop. So, I jumped at the chance to add my own art style to it and make it into something so much better than before. 

The one on the right is the new version. Some of you saw it on Tuesday. The changes I made to it were this: I made the cloud a bit lighter and more transparent, added a border and ground beneath the person and added some stats to turn it into a PSA. The biggest change I made was to the umbrella. At home I thought it might look quite a bit better to pull it all down over his head and have more shadows in there and I think it's more successful like this and has more dimension. Please let me know anything else I can do or tweak to make this better. Thanks!