Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designer students. This final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
PSA reworked
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I have moved some of the text up into the ribbon/triangle shape area and have attempted to make the purple in the logo and text at the bottom of the poster more legible by choosing a lighter purple hue. Any feedback or ideas?
I really like how you have a consistent color theme going on with the purple. The eyes tie in very nicely and I like the placement of the top text. The only thing is the text in the middle of the page underneath the logo. It seems just a little squished.
I agree - it is a better shape than in the previous design, so now just move it down so that negative space surrounds and cushions it. Have you printed this out? Should the value of the purple ribbon be a bit lighter?
This really design speaks to me on multiple levels. Both personally and as a designer, however, I would think the purple ribbon could be a tad bit brighter and the "Shelter together" a tad bit larger as I am assuming it is the header in this situation. However it is still a really nice piece.
I really like how you have a consistent color theme going on with the purple. The eyes tie in very nicely and I like the placement of the top text. The only thing is the text in the middle of the page underneath the logo. It seems just a little squished.
ReplyDeleteI agree - it is a better shape than in the previous design, so now just move it down so that negative space surrounds and cushions it. Have you printed this out? Should the value of the purple ribbon be a bit lighter?
ReplyDeleteThis really design speaks to me on multiple levels. Both personally and as a designer, however, I would think the purple ribbon could be a tad bit brighter and the "Shelter together" a tad bit larger as I am assuming it is the header in this situation. However it is still a really nice piece.
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