Malala update
I have updated most of the background elements to create a more cohesive design. I moved the quote up and fit it around Malala's shoulder. I decided to use a serif font for her name, enlarge it and changed the hue. I also took the original body copy, edited it down quite a bit and fit it on the newspaper so that it flowed better in the composition. Feedback is welcome...
The Malala illustration has improved! I really like where you placed your text. The text definitely flows better in your design. I love the font you chose for Malala and the quote. The design is more unified and balanced! Great job!
ReplyDeleteType placement in the composition is improving. Have you considered adding line spacing to the upper left type... and making sure it is bold enough to take its place in the composition? Her name could be even bolder (typestyle has a bolder version?) with a thicker stroke around it - because it overlaps those books... and needs to stand out a bit more. Is there a way to lessen the contrast behind the quote? A bit more work is needed to make sure that quote is easily read... it's all about contrast!
ReplyDeleteThis is looking great! I love the darker background and letters. I had a thought that maybe on Malala’s name you could make the stroke larger to make it 3D, maybe making it a dark brown. Just a thought on that. It’s looking good!
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