Project 1-Update
This is an updated version of my first project that I had revised. I appreciate the suggestions given! What I have done to improve the triptych is change the position of the lines that represent rays from the clock. I have also enlarged the type so that each line sits in between each line and gave equal space between each line.
I think this looks really good. Bylines are often smaller than the quotes themselves, and if you reduced "-Albert Einstein" it might fit better in that space, leaving more room between the type and the top of the building.
ReplyDeleteOh yes, you are right Coni! I will change that. Thank you for the feedback!
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