Triptych Final Touches
As a few of you pointed out, the triptych was in need of its original quote. With this, I brought the quote back but moved it to the center of the overall composition as opposed to the right panel because I felt it would follow the rhythm of the sky motif.
Overall, I'm quite happy with the progress made on this piece. If any of you have any further suggestions, I'm more than happy to take them into consideration.
As I've said before, this is an amazing design. The quote is great and I like it being placed in the middle panel. I think that maybe the font size needs to be increased just a bit. I wonder if the red of the planet in the far right panel would increase the contrast against the dark hue that it sits on. Good work!
ReplyDeleteI agree - the type is too small. Consider using the bottom of each panel to hold at least 1 line of type. Maybe some panels will need to hold more than 1.
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