Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designer students. This final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
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I have made changes to the font and I have gotten rid of the machinery that was behind the tigers back.
This is still part of a triptych, right? I'm hoping you haven't decided to eliminate the other part. So now, let's look at how and where you have emphasized the typography. Currently you have "pinked" the word Every. Not sure that helps us scan the quote for its meaning. In fact, I'm not sure you need to emphasize any word(s)... it isn't that long... and I can't see a way to pull out a few words that would help us know what Thoreau meant. I think you need to whole thing! So - consider eliminating the pink entirely - and let the whole quote speak for itself. That's my opinion. If you'd like to incorporate some color... choose to use a color from the tiger's head (orange or orange brown). Experiment with what color would help unite the type with the image.
This is still part of a triptych, right? I'm hoping you haven't decided to eliminate the other part. So now, let's look at how and where you have emphasized the typography. Currently you have "pinked" the word Every. Not sure that helps us scan the quote for its meaning. In fact, I'm not sure you need to emphasize any word(s)... it isn't that long... and I can't see a way to pull out a few words that would help us know what Thoreau meant. I think you need to whole thing! So - consider eliminating the pink entirely - and let the whole quote speak for itself. That's my opinion. If you'd like to incorporate some color... choose to use a color from the tiger's head (orange or orange brown). Experiment with what color would help unite the type with the image.
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