Project4 - Rework2
I increased the point size of the green text to give even more contrast with the surrounding phrases and repositioned to the middle where the central focal point is. I redid the bruising effect using the burn, pucker, and bloat tool to minimize the eye area, swell the bruise, and darken the areas. I duplicated the text layer over the woman, brought the opacity down, and used a low opacity brush to erase around the bruised area. Any other suggestions and feedback would be greatly appreciated!
This PSA is very effective and well done. It is jarring to look at, which is exactly what you wanted and have achieved. The only suggestion I would have is to make the "It will happen again...." text just the smallest amount darker. This is a fantastic piece of work. Great work!
ReplyDeleteIt looks done to me!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very strong piece and looks amazing. The text and imagery is evenly distributed and everything stands out and I really like how the text fades over the image a little bit.
ReplyDeleteThis looks fantastic, Melissa. The bruise looks so real! It's so strong and powerful. Great job!
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