Mount Wachusett Community College, in Gardner MA offers a 2-year program for Graphic and Interactive Designer students. This final course in the GID program helps students assemble and present their best work produced in the program. This blog is produced by the GID Portfolio class under the direction of instructor Coni Porter.
Kid's Clothing Brand (Mockup/Ad Improvement)
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I went in and re-worded this ad, as well as put them together. (See other post for everything else related to this brand) and put more emphasis on certain words with italics. I think this looks better.
This ad looks great! I really like the overall layout design and font choice for "kids get messy.." The only little thing I've noticed is there a bright sheen in the background in the upper left, and I know that's probably just part of the photo but my eye keeps leading me there. Maybe because it's so close to the white rectangle on that side? Maybe it's just me. Everything looks awesome though! :)
Hmmm... I see what Melissa is seeing, now that I look closely. I think it is a white window behind his head... and it is merging with the white of the background behind your type. I suggest you take that into Photoshop and eliminate that window. Otherwise this looks good!
This ad looks great! I really like the overall layout design and font choice for "kids get messy.." The only little thing I've noticed is there a bright sheen in the background in the upper left, and I know that's probably just part of the photo but my eye keeps leading me there. Maybe because it's so close to the white rectangle on that side? Maybe it's just me. Everything looks awesome though! :)
ReplyDeleteHmmm... I see what Melissa is seeing, now that I look closely. I think it is a white window behind his head... and it is merging with the white of the background behind your type. I suggest you take that into Photoshop and eliminate that window. Otherwise this looks good!
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